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Workers lavatories
-- Stephane Bosman (stephane_bosman@yahoo.co.uk), March 19, 2002
Dramatic lighting. You did a good job with the exposure in this difficult lighting situation. The image may have been better if the trash along the floor were kick out of the way. Also the dramtic light is great but it seems like more attention to subject matter may have improved this image, if it could have been (ie. a worker). If you did not tell me they were "workers lavatories" I would have thought it was just three doors and the image was all about the light.
-- Rob Schopke (schopke@attbi.com), March 19, 2002.
Thank you Rob, for taking the time to comment on each picture. You're the second person to suggest to remove the trash, but I would rather not take the picture. I have, quite arbitrarily, decided not to touch anything and to show things I saw rather than things I made.I agree that the legend is inappropriate. It is true that the real subject is the light and the graphism of the doors. I did not want to insides to be completely dark either because I thought it would help to understand the picture and the situation.
-- Stephane Bosman (stephane_bosman@yahoo.co.uk), March 19, 2002.