The venture starts
within thy heart
Extend thy hands, recieve,

The grasping Axe
A silver Vax
Tho Arne' doth do grieve.

And the Crepel Ack
Dest a brickle track
as trove doth bound away,

And thefs of goles
Aken-dered holes
by leaping merry shea,

Thie hand-axe gleams
flourescent dreams
and forges as thy go,

a blip of smat
enabes Fi-crat
as hurry thee to show.

Toon aft and far
commenced thine mar
as yon gallumphs furray,

threy neigh thee near
when thou doest hear
arrive at MacTarray.

The path is sworn
the sword is drawn
As thee met abogai,

And aft thy plea
the contral tree
gapes out a starkey cry.

"And how?" Thou say
"Be on thy way!"
Snip-snap goeth piney oak,

And Whipper-crack!
Fret the Biederwack!
As Contral doth do croak.

It lay abound
the Squeamish ground
And Riers true and true,

Thie sword yon flap
Cov'red with Sap,
As thee finds Yacial due.

And walk away
thou do today
hold in thy memory,

Thy Bloodstained sword
of which thy hoard,
hath toppled mighty tree.

~I wrote this while i was suposed to be reading some article in my english class....It's in the style of "Jabberwocky" by Lewis Carrol.

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-- Anonymous, October 26, 2002

Answers

wow.you are a better poet than i rootbeer-kun

-- Anonymous, October 26, 2002

Rootbeer-san...-kun is for an inferior, usually meaning "little boy". And "Jabberwocky" is a night awsome poem. Your poem, Rootbeer-san, interesting and emotion description of a woodcutter. Very impressive.

-- Anonymous, October 26, 2002

i always thought -san ment mr. or mrs. well i learned somthing new today

-- Anonymous, October 27, 2002

For my 500th post, I'd just like to say:

LET'S GO SMOKE SOME CRACK!

-- Anonymous, October 27, 2002